This election was one of the interesting election in the history of the United States of America. The especial interesting about this election is the fact that American people didn't care about the race of the candidates, but for what they believe and would accomplish for America. However, the most attractive point in this election is that a African-American won the election who would change so many for kids in this country. He is the good example for all especially for young people because he make them have a interesting for politic and moreover young people believe in him by voting so many than precedents Election Presidential. Obama open a door for young people in politic that we hope would never close. He shows that everyone could dream higher and make a change in this country. By following his steps, everything seem easier, but we have a lot to work out.
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I think you a high quality student.You have some spelling grammar like president you spell wrong and few .Is good that you use tradition words like moreover however .last thing you should tell me why you think that BARACK OBAMA ''opened the doors for the young people [politics]
your ideas and writing is very high qualiy but work on your making your sentences clear and fixyour word slike president
Hi Aurelie,
I agree with Jakanko, you are a "high quality" student!
I agree with you that President Obama will be a shining example to so many children of color in our country. He has "opened a door" for others.
How will you use his example to change what you are going to do in your lifetime? I'd love to know.
Keep Blogging!
-Mr. Levy
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